Haiku For you

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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:07 pm

~ wrote:Hold on a minute;
6: 'A-tten-tion I seek out,'
Haiku-fu is weak.

A perplexing thing,
Grammar; to decide how to
End a line...


What you say is false.
4 in my 'A-Ten-shi-on'
Have At Thee.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby ~ » Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:40 am

It seems the number
Of syllables is in the
Mind of the reader

What I say is true,
From a certain point of view;
Fear my rhyme haiku.
"Now, if you'll bear with me a moment..."
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Mon Apr 26, 2010 10:10 pm

What is misleading,
What do you call a phoneme?
What is 'On'?
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby ~ » Thu Apr 29, 2010 1:26 am

'Pon my soul good sir,
I hae nae ken o' yo' "on",
O Burns, guide my sword!
"Now, if you'll bear with me a moment..."
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:45 pm

It is Japanese.
The Language of Haiku.
Not 'Gaelic'.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Wed May 26, 2010 11:14 pm

No Riposte to my
Words cut deep when wounds are...
The past is not dead.

*

A sleepless slumber
Count the dead hours between
Now and then.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby ~ » Wed May 26, 2010 11:47 pm

Tabs in a flurry,
All research to satisfy,
Character concept.

~

The eve draws long, and
'Pon my bed a raven sits:
Ah, open window.

~

Hard bench and paper,
Charitable symphony,
Angels' flat faces.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Thu May 27, 2010 7:11 am

From the Giants that Might,
Here comes the Science we all Love!
Science Yeah!

Two Sticks Cross over
Words fall like leaves in a breeze
Fall into the cold.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby ~ » Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:07 am

Chicken chicken chick-
En chicken chicken chicken;
Chicken chicken...damn.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby ~ » Thu Oct 07, 2010 1:31 pm

Experimental
Crossovers are essential
To progress, therefore:

The starveling cat!
The starveling cat! Watches
You sleep! Takes your hat!
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:40 pm

To All New Members
Try out a Haiku. Today!
Three-Five-Three (or -Five)
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Twitchy » Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:48 pm

But Craig don't you mean
More like five-seven-then-five?
That is much better.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:49 pm

You have seen my plan.
I have been foiled once more! Drat
Where did I go wrong?!
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby feeshy » Sun Oct 10, 2010 3:42 pm

To me it appears,
Odd numbers; perhaps you find
Three, five, seven- same.


If all that was writ,
In haiku form, presented,
YouTube- much improved?


Twas brillig, and came
The Jabberwock. Vorpal blade-
Dead. Callooh, callay!
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:18 pm

A hidden talent,
Train you we must, in our ways
One of Us.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:33 pm

A new post title,
The start of a new three-quel?
Like that new hope film.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Haruhiist » Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:40 pm

Gazing at mountains,
Dancing and falling slowly,
The mountains remain
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby feeshy » Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:25 pm

"Ninja Squirrel- dun
Dun dun dun- he's a ninja!"
That's how the theme goes.
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby Pureferret » Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:41 pm

Haruhiist wrote:Gazing at mountains,
Dancing and falling slowly,
The mountains remain

This is beautiful,
A true Haiku master here,
But is it beauty?
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Re: Haiku For you

Postby feeshy » Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:07 pm

Souls drift like cobwebs
Flowing from the sky like snow
Shining like the moon


See; making haikus
Pretty is just a matter
Of much similie.
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